Smile

Smile

A Poem by Lisasview
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My first Seynru poem

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Smile

smiling old woman
colourful wet clothes hanging
wind blows sandy dirt

© 2023 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
Hi there,
If you read any of my work I would appreciate a review. Constructive critics are always welcome. I always leave reviews for everything I read.

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A mesmerizing haiku. One that speaks of life in such a simple action. It brings back a lot of memories to my mind. Especially watching my grandmother hanging wet clothes out to dry back in the late 60's and early 70's. It is a simple moment that leaves a lifetime impression upon the heart. Excellent work on these words.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

hi carlos long time no see... typing with my left finger because i broke my clavicle bone...
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I bet no one who visits this page can leave it without the smile it caused to remain on their face .. Neville just about to hop into a late shower

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Such a kind review Neville
Thank you
Good evening, Lisa View,
This is a nice poem.
I like the touch of the picture with your poem.
----1809 Black Plague December

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

I always love adding the perfect image to my poems..glad you liked it.
Lisa, now in Spain
1809 Black Plague December

1 Year Ago

you are most welcome, honey,
You always have to wonder old women are smiling about.
Excellent Senru

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Oh my goodness Cherrie
I was just trying out this form and accidentally posted it!!?
I.. read more
Lisasview

1 Year Ago

I reposted it..
Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

You have all the elements.
Plus it is beautifully layered. Each line so very simple but vis.. read more

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Added on April 29, 2023
Last Updated on April 30, 2023

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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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