Interlude On Ice

Interlude On Ice

A Poem by Lisasview
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Rhyming Cameo Style ...my own version.

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INTERLUDE On ICE


Brazen, 

gliding on the edge.

Glassy ice calls her name again!

Moving now,

auburn hair floating in the air …

dancing on skates, like no one

is there.

© 2023 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
If you read my Rhyming Cameo poem I would appreciate a review.
I always review whatever I read.
Hope you enjoy my first try at this form. 7 lines ... 2-5-8-3-8-7-2 syllables
Lisa

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The feeling of skates cutting across ice, setting up speed, raising one leg, turning, turning then - swirling into the air is breath-taking! As is your poem. You have captured that feelings in seven lines, a fine visual and a remarkable genre!

How descriptive your words, how emotionally physical,

'auburn hair floating in the air …
dancing on skates, like no one
is there.'

Nobody but you could be there.. ever. It embraces time, yours.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

6 Months Ago

Hello again,
Weird thing is that I just finished reading something you wrote and tried to lea.. read more
emmajoygreen

6 Months Ago

Yet another oops.. The place must be tired after a busy weekend! I know you wanted to leave a rave .. read more



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When we do things we throughly enjoy and love sometimes; the world seems to fall away and we get lost in the moment.

This poem sounds like someone letting all else drift as the are enthralled by the moment.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

3 Months Ago

Good morning from very hot Spain,
I am going through all my many poems to make sure I have t.. read more
Poetic Beauty

3 Months Ago

You are welcome. I randomly pop on and off this site so I don’t worry about belated thank yous
Lisasview

3 Months Ago

Oh good…
Lisa
The feeling of skates cutting across ice, setting up speed, raising one leg, turning, turning then - swirling into the air is breath-taking! As is your poem. You have captured that feelings in seven lines, a fine visual and a remarkable genre!

How descriptive your words, how emotionally physical,

'auburn hair floating in the air …
dancing on skates, like no one
is there.'

Nobody but you could be there.. ever. It embraces time, yours.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

6 Months Ago

Hello again,
Weird thing is that I just finished reading something you wrote and tried to lea.. read more
emmajoygreen

6 Months Ago

Yet another oops.. The place must be tired after a busy weekend! I know you wanted to leave a rave .. read more
Lisa!
It is 8:30 AM EDT, here in Wake Forest, so GOOD MORNING!
I looked through all five pages of your poems and could not find "Rhyming Cameo."
I hope you are feeling better every day!
Vol

Posted 1 Year Ago


More proof that the image IS the message... Sharp as shards, this one!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Vol for taking the time to read and review my work!
Lisa
This makes me think of the movie, "Ice Castles." The beautiful freedom of his is invigorating. I can feel the wind beneath my wings.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely review,
Lisa
This is most probably the only way to truly dance: "like no one is there." And to be named by what we dance to or on brings this poem to its zenith. And as these words ring in crystal clarity poet, poem and reader in unison 'gliding on the edge!' That is a liberation and liberality that shines.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

I just love, love, love your amazing thoughts on my poem!
Thank you so very much,
Lisa
Wonderful! Such a feeling to express yourself with no constraints. Free to enjoy yourself...gliding on that icy edge, hair flowing and dancing without a care!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Oh boy, do I ever agree... however quite frankly this was not easy!!!
Fun but not easy...
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Lisa dear... Your Cameo style is soft Jazz as she glides on Ice...
Her Heart strings play like Violins when the movement begins...
Your form encircles in breath-taking lines...
as only a Musician could define... Be still my Heart
Softly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

You make my words come alive dearest pat!!
Lisa
Dear Lisa,

This poem is the essence of feminine beauty and liberty. You create fire on ice with your words and make my spirit soar and I just love you for it. You're a writer par excellence. Kudos!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

Wow, what kind words to say dearest Divya.
Thank you,
Lisa
I love it. period1
Best, B

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

1 Year Ago

I just love that you love it!!
Thank you so much,
Lisa

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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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