Forevermore

Rhyming Quatrains with a Rhyming Couplet envoi poem regarding thoughts of death... Grateful to Richard for finding the perfect artwork for my poem and helping me along my journey writing poetry.

   

     Forevermore....

Lie me down on a bed of lavender;

naked, I will be in the blazing sun.

Upon death, to this earth I surrender …

for, my journey here with you is now done.

Remember my laughter in ocean's waves …

floating along with no care in the world.

As we hid inside of deep dark sea caves,

our eyes met softly, as blue waters swirled.

Kissing your salty neck, I held on tight

with loving thoughts....I drift to you again,

watching day's sun disappear into night,

knowing our true love's depth would never wane.

Beyond life, to your open arms I soar;

our souls entwine now ~ and forevermore....

Author's Note

If you happen to read my poem I would so appreciate a review.
I always review.. Each line has 10 syllables.
Thank you,
Lisa

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

One of your finest works, Lisa🍷

Whoever said sadness and death have no beauty, never read this.
It was great working together with you in formulating this creatively gorgeous piece.

Many memorable blessings shared … thank you always, Ma'am! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Lisasview]

Hi Richard,
Great to get a review from you. This is one of my most favorite poems I have written.
Of course I have been thinking of you….and even more in the past couple of days.
My plan was to message you… and, and I will…
~ Lisa

[fen]

this poem is so beautifully written, Lisa! i mean it, it is amazing and once i read the first verse, i just couldn't stop until the very last one. very comforting words, but also advocating to the roughness of nature, the contrast of love and death, light and darkness... thanks for sharing this with us!

[Lisasview]

What a fantastic review! I read this yesterday and thought i had replied... I do think I did but forgot to press Post Comment.
Thank you so much!

[Karenina]

This is a stunning verse. A sonnet to comfort all who grieve, for surely there is a brighter heavenly light beneath which we will rejoice eternally! Your envoi is simply perfect! So nice to read your work!

[Lisasview]

Wow, you certainly are Johnny on the spot. I know you will love the site. It runs so smoothly...no glitches and not actual continuous contests.
And the writers on her are true poets.
What is great is that when you review you can read all the reviews before for the poem... Makes the poem really come alive.
I am so excited that you joined.
This will be such fun.
Love to you,
Lisa

[Lisasview]

P.S. Perhaps sounds like a Sonnet, but it is a Rhyming Quatrain with a Rhyming couplet envoi.
This is the way I really write...
Goodnight,
Lisa

[Karenina]

Ah! Well, there you go! It felt as eloquent as any sonnet I've read! Thanks for referring me here, Lisa. I'm quite excited about exploring the site!

[Lisasview]

This is a fairly easy site.
I am very involved with the perfect font, color, size and image.
There are amazing icons that provide everything except the image, but that you can easily get from Google and just move one. You can easily resize the image to make it fit the way you want it to.
On thi site I have all sorts of poems... A few are seductive.....some I wrote when i ws 20 years old...
Now I am off to read yours before going to the beach, first time this year and it is only 5 minutes away! We plan to be there at 8:15 and spend two hours and then go to the gym and spa...
L

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

I just finished reading your poem "Forevermore" and I have to say, I am completely blown away. Your words are so powerful and evocative, and they really touched me on a deep level.
The way you use imagery to create a sense of place and mood is truly masterful. The idea of lying down on a bed of lavender is so peaceful and calming, and it really sets the tone for the rest of the poem. And the way you describe the ocean, with its waves and caves and blue waters, is so vivid and beautiful.
Your use of language is also really impressive. The way you've structured the lines, with their rhymes and rhythms, gives the poem a sense of flow and musicality that's really pleasing to read. And the way you've chosen your words, with their soft sounds and gentle alliteration, creates a sense of intimacy and tenderness that's really moving.
But what really struck me about your poem is the depth of emotion that it conveys. The way you describe the love between two people, and the way you explore the idea of life and death and what comes after, is so powerful and moving. Your words really touched my heart, and I know they will stay with me for a long time to come.
Thank you so much for sharing your gift with the world. Your poem is truly a work of art, and I feel honored to have had the chance to read it.

[Lisasview]

I just can not believe that I did not respond to your glorious review of my poem. My only excuse is that I broke my clavicle and shortly after that I broke three ribs... All of this on my right side... And, I am right handed...So, I was unable to type for quite some time.
I do remember your review and came back to it just moments ago to write you a big thank you.
I am so humbled by your gracious words my friend. You have a beautiful way of writing down your thoughts.
I have now reread my poem and your review several times and my heart is filled with joy.
Lisasview, now in Spain

[Lisasview]

I have been away from writing for quite sometime now and decided to go back to my many wonderful reviews which I knew would inspire me to write again. I came across your incredible review of my poem Forevermore and wanted to say thank you again. You really understood the exact thoughts of what I was writing about...
Thank you again... I am thinking that you might like a poem that I wrote called Innocence. That poem is full of unplanned metaphors.
Lisa, still living in Spain

[Archishman Rick]

You have expressed these lines in such a beautiful and poetic fashion that it leaves a heartfelt impression. You are welcoming your new journey with open arms, as you lie fondly inculcated with the meaningful memories, lessons and insights gained the way through. You are drifting in a divine direction, where etheric ends will meet, and spirit will ascend. In this next journey, you shall drift again with newfound grace, in a timeless travel that doesn't map destinations, but sets destinies through boundless horizons. The colours will flow and dance again in each new creative rhythm, as fresh realities bloom, in the afterglowing essence of the bygone experience.
Kind regards,
Archishman Rick Dasgupta

[Lisasview]

You message is so beautiful...much like a poem itself... I plan on keeping this and receding it often..forever...
Thank you so much for truly understanding the meaning of my poem.
Lisa

[Archishman Rick]

My pleasure :) A lovely piece to read

[Addie Sinclair]

So beautiful! I could see the picture you were painting.

[Lisasview]

Thank you much for reading and reviewing my poem Addie..
I think you might enjoy my poem Miles Apart.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Lorry]

Beautifully told. Such softness and warmth in your thoughts penned, about when we are together again.

[Lisasview]

I am so happy to see that you saw my message.... many others did not.
Thank you,
Lisa

[Ken Simm.]

Romance writ so well. I like this a lot. The language and the wording brings me calm. And dare I say it memories.

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Ken for reading and reviewing my poem. It is for sure the most read of all my work. (I keep a book of the names of every person that leaves a review of my poems..) Probably bit obsessive but I do enjoy looking and seeing which are popular and which are not.
This poem is actually about thoughts of my own death....
Lisa

[Lydia Shutter]

You write the form poetry so precisely...wonderful. The meter and the words you choose to convey both love and loss flow so easily and the rhyming is not forced. Very enjoyable. I see you like to post an image with your poetry too. Lydi**

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much for your very kind review... This one was written about my own death... My thoughts about it...
Glad you enjoyed it...
Lisa

[Soren]

Like a rhyming crossword puzzle, but much more intricate in that it holds such emotion, this poem shows how much work you put into it. I like that you chose lavender as the color of the print. It flows like honey.

[Lisasview]

Thank you dear Soren ...I love your review!
I too love the colors.. I chose these to represent my poem.
Lisa