Tender

Rhyming Quatrains and Couplet

    Tender ....

   Tender hands caress my naked body, 

   satin sheets glide between our entwined arms,

   morning changed from bright sunlight to cloudy

   … soft, grey-blue eyes full of your loving charms.

   

   Pulling me closer, I feel your desire ...

   dance me with love, as evening starts so grand.

   These moments with you, I will never tire;

   touch me ~ wantonly with your warm sure hand,

   

   Knowing well what I always want and trust.

   Time becomes a moment for us to share.

   Still love you darling, your full lips of lust;

   losing you to her I could never bear.

   Life is such, that things often need to change.

   By the window … now, you're far out of range.

Author's Note

Not sure where this came from.. But my mind often plays tricks on me and forces pen to paper to fill the page with hidden thoughts and meanings.
Lisa,now in Spain
If you read my work kindly take the time to review.
I always review everything I read...

Reviews

[Vol]

Lisa,
In a world of sensory overload, all those sweet sensual moments, caresses, nibbles, and kisses, that look of desire burning in the other's eyes, are like cool water in the desert, a refuge from chaos, and nourishment for a thirsty soul. Anyone who might wander away from all that sweet candy between the sheets deserves to never find it again...
Vol

[Lisasview]

Hi Vol,
I am going through each of my poems and making sure that I read and thank each person for their review. I see that you wrote me a very nice review for Tender a year ago... So please accept my apologies for my very late response.
I LOVE your review... Thank you so much,
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

Love and loss conveyed beautifully in these lines.

morning changed from bright sunlight
to cloudy

Memories linger of those tender moments shared which were not to last. Lovely poetic expression here Lisa. Good to see a new poem from a very busy you.

Chris

[Lisasview]

Hi Chris,
I decided to submit three new poems over the weekend...Hope you have a chance to read them.
Thank you for always reviewing!!
Hugs,
Lisa

[William Michael Reeves]

Your so close to having a sonnet. I like the progression , even if it has a sad ending. But that's what makes good poetry. Taking the story to an unexpected conclusion. I thought for sure they were going to burn in their passion. But things got so cold so quick. I'll look for the first poem.

Check your 10th line. Two to's, where I think you may have wanted 'two to'.

[Lisasview]

Thank you for your excellent review dear William.
And, thank you for actually reading my poem carefully and finding my error.
Yes, there should only be ~ one to ~ not two to's
It is so great when someone carefully reads a poem and helps the poet with errors ... I am so appreciative..
Lisa, now in Spain

[William Michael Reeves]

I learned from Dear Abbey many years ago that if someone can do something about it you tell them. If not, don't.

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh good old Dear Abbey... wise advise.
Thank you again..

[Patricia Wedel]

Beautiful feelings painted in our mind when Passions linger like Ships in the Night. The Waves and crescendoes bring those Memories.
gently, Pat

[Lisasview]

Thank you dear Patricia for your kind words..
Lisa

[Neville]

this was so very lovely Lisa .. the gentlest strains of erotica are subtly & tastefully woven throughout, indeed through top to bottom and leave this reader wanting another stanza or two ... N :)

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh dearest Neville, I can not believe I forgot to say thank you for your wonderful and inspiring review....Lisa

[Anahat]

Just as the title, the emotions poured in this poem are tender. I really like how I can almost visualise the scene as I read it.

Lovely work.

Love,
Anahat

[Lisasview]

Oh. hello again Anahat,
I submitted this one yesterday...It had been several weeks since I submitted. Glad ou liked this one too.
Lisa