Dreams

This is another poem I wrote in 1970 .. Art courtesy of Pinterest Parabolic Quatrains

  

   Dreams

Finding you

   on long walks,

     endless travels,

       through dreams

         of

          deserted dreamlands.

          I fling back

          the dark night,

          finding you waiting for me;

         naked, arms open.

        Time …

       becomes but a moment, 

     a dream;

   then, I fall back

to reality.

Author's Note

If you have read my poem I would really appreciate a review.
I always review everything I read.
Thank you,
Lisa

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

A delightful poem of flowing dreams, and gently swaying lines to show us what many of us dream about because it is so upbeat and romantic...then unfortunately we awaken to reality with a shock and disappointment that in fact, it was not authentic....back to sleep!!!
Lovely, Lisa
Warmly, B

[Lisasview]

Ha ha Betty,
Yes, what you say is so very true...
Lisa

[Miss Sharon]

So beautiful! (I fling back the dark night, finding you waiting for me) Awesome poetic prosody my dear. Shine on! ~Sharon

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much dear Miss Sharon and I sorry for the delay in saying thank you..
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

And then the dream was broken.... what a disappointment that can be when we land with a bump. Felt that unkind landing here Lisa. Very nicely composed and I love the unusual layout of your words and your posted image. Very much enjoyed.

Chris

[Lisasview]

Hi Chris, Sorry for the delay in responding to your lovely review...things have been a little overwhelming here..
So, I have been tardy with saying thank you and with submitting any new works.. But yesterday I did submit 3 new poems..finally!!
Lisa

[M. J. Smith]

Wow! Cool form! And yes, very dreamlike. Hate the landings. Ouch! Well done.

[Lisasview]

Thank you for your very kind review.
Please that you take the time to review and read.
Thank you so much,
Lisa

[Gee]

Reads , along with other writes, that your teens, twenties were quite turbulent when it came to matters of the heart.
Another fine piece of writing :))

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Gordon... Yes, i was not always in a great place.. Luckily all that changed..
read moreThank you so much Gordon... Yes, i was not always in a great place.. Luckily all that changed..
Thank you for your review..
Lisa

[Relic]

Whenever I read your poems I see a woman who wants to express her lust in an artful and erotic way. Each of your new ones does that, all the while shedding some sadness at the same time.

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh, I just noticed that i neglected to say thank you Tim... I loved your review and it was wonderful rereading it just now..
Lisa

[lightsong]

Really love this one dear Lisa! it feels different from all what I've read from You till now, back from the 70th yet still fresh and new. the waving shape added more magic to your poem. it's all like a spell, a breath wafts before leaving its wistful mark on the place... truly wonderful.

[Lisasview]

Thank you again for reading another one of my very early writings.. At the time I never thought of them as poems...just my thoughts..
about love and life..
Thank you,
Lisa

[lightsong]

Wow! I just saw the photo it wasn't there when I first read it! SO BEAUTIFUL!

[Lisasview]

Took forever to find just the right photo.. I really love this one..works so well with my poem.. Thank you!!