Lisa! You certainly are turning out to be the sensual one, aren't you. haha Your choice of words and the anticipation you share and have shared in your other poems is a fine style to undertake. I'm sure the girls on the site will see this and blush. :)
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you for being the first one to review this poem..
I wrote it yesterday.. Found the phot.. read moreThank you for being the first one to review this poem..
I wrote it yesterday.. Found the photo today and submitted it..Richard suggested that I make it more persona,l not as an observer..which it originally was..
Lisa, cold and dark now in Spain..
2 Years Ago
good old Richard ............ its just warming up here in England :)
Thank you so much Pete.. this is one of there seductive poems i submitted recently..
Never tr.. read moreThank you so much Pete.. this is one of there seductive poems i submitted recently..
Never tried writing anything seductive before..
Lisa
This is lovely and definitely feel how much she wants him.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
Hi Adriana,
You got it!! Yes, she definitely wants him...
Thank you for the review.. I.. read moreHi Adriana,
You got it!! Yes, she definitely wants him...
Thank you for the review.. I really appreciate. it..
Lisa, now in Spain
A well penned sensual
poem ..expressing deep
thoughts of anticipation
of sweet desires
nice work
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
How nice of you to review my poem.. This is my 3rd try and sensual poetry... so It is great to think.. read moreHow nice of you to review my poem.. This is my 3rd try and sensual poetry... so It is great to think it is nice work.
Perhaps you will find the time to read my first two...
Thank you again,
Lisa, now is sunny Spain.
Thank you Soren...This is my third sensual poem...
Never wrote anything like this before..read moreThank you Soren...This is my third sensual poem...
Never wrote anything like this before..
Lisa
Woah a desirous sensual poem, romantic and full of passion. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thank you enjoying and reviewing my poem
This is the third sensual poem I have ever written.<.. read moreThank you enjoying and reviewing my poem
This is the third sensual poem I have ever written.
Did you see my other two??
I will look at yours today
Lisa, now in Spain
Lisa!!!
You are the queen of the sensual poetry, what a beautiful tender sensual words
I am addicted , I adore you
Posted 2 Years Ago
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2 Years Ago
What a very nice thing to say... So this is my third try at sensual poetry..Did you read my other tw.. read moreWhat a very nice thing to say... So this is my third try at sensual poetry..Did you read my other two?
And Thank you!!
Lisa! You certainly are turning out to be the sensual one, aren't you. haha Your choice of words and the anticipation you share and have shared in your other poems is a fine style to undertake. I'm sure the girls on the site will see this and blush. :)
Posted 2 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
2 Years Ago
Thank you for being the first one to review this poem..
I wrote it yesterday.. Found the phot.. read moreThank you for being the first one to review this poem..
I wrote it yesterday.. Found the photo today and submitted it..Richard suggested that I make it more persona,l not as an observer..which it originally was..
Lisa, cold and dark now in Spain..
2 Years Ago
good old Richard ............ its just warming up here in England :)
I have been writing poetry and short stories since I was 10..so 64 years!
I have never connected with any groups but recently thought why not..
So here I ..looking at where this adventure leads me. more..