Desire

Desire

A Poem by Lisasview
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Third one of my sensual poems... Free Verse

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    Desire....


I can't help looking ...

naked he stands,

his body, a young man's;

yet ...

older.


Behind the door  ...

hiding,

watching him shave ...

knowing

soon his legs

will cover mine.


Air heavy

in moaning desire,

he appears ...

bodies press together; 

yearnings release

we both desire.


Quivering anticipation;

our love continues....

through the night.


          ~~~


© 2023 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
If you happen to pass by and read my poem I would appreciate a review.
I always review whatever I read.
Thank you,
Lisa

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Lisa! You certainly are turning out to be the sensual one, aren't you. haha Your choice of words and the anticipation you share and have shared in your other poems is a fine style to undertake. I'm sure the girls on the site will see this and blush. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Suppose to pour.... again...here
Lisa
Neville

2 Years Ago


ah' well dont they say 'the rain in Spain falls mainly on the plain' .. :)
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Ha ha......




Reviews

so real and impassioned. very well done ... :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Pete.. this is one of there seductive poems i submitted recently..
Never tr.. read more
This is lovely and definitely feel how much she wants him.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Hi Adriana,
You got it!! Yes, she definitely wants him...
Thank you for the review.. I.. read more
A well penned sensual
poem ..expressing deep
thoughts of anticipation
of sweet desires

nice work

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lisasview

2 Years Ago

How nice of you to review my poem.. This is my 3rd try and sensual poetry... so It is great to think.. read more
Very sensuous erotic and well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Thank you Soren...This is my third sensual poem...
Never wrote anything like this before..read more
Woah a desirous sensual poem, romantic and full of passion. Kudos!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Thank you enjoying and reviewing my poem
This is the third sensual poem I have ever written.<.. read more
Lisa!!!
You are the queen of the sensual poetry, what a beautiful tender sensual words
I am addicted , I adore you

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

What a very nice thing to say... So this is my third try at sensual poetry..Did you read my other tw.. read more
Lisa! You certainly are turning out to be the sensual one, aren't you. haha Your choice of words and the anticipation you share and have shared in your other poems is a fine style to undertake. I'm sure the girls on the site will see this and blush. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Suppose to pour.... again...here
Lisa
Neville

2 Years Ago


ah' well dont they say 'the rain in Spain falls mainly on the plain' .. :)
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Ha ha......


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Added on March 6, 2022
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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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