Desire

Third one of my sensual poems... Free Verse

   

    Desire....

I can't help looking ...

naked he stands,

his body, a young man's;

yet ...

older.

Behind the door  ...

hiding,

watching him shave ...

knowing

soon his legs

will cover mine.

Air heavy

in moaning desire,

he appears ...

bodies press together; 

yearnings release

we both desire.

Quivering anticipation;

our love continues....

through the night.

          ~~~

Author's Note

If you happen to pass by and read my poem I would appreciate a review.
I always review whatever I read.
Thank you,
Lisa

Reviews

[Relic]

Lisa! You certainly are turning out to be the sensual one, aren't you. haha Your choice of words and the anticipation you share and have shared in your other poems is a fine style to undertake. I'm sure the girls on the site will see this and blush. :)

[Lisasview]

Thank you for being the first one to review this poem..
I wrote it yesterday.. Found the photo today and submitted it..Richard suggested that I make it more persona,l not as an observer..which it originally was..
Lisa, cold and dark now in Spain..

[Neville]

good old Richard ............ its just warming up here in England :)

[Lisasview]

Suppose to pour.... again...here
Lisa

[Neville]

ah' well dont they say 'the rain in Spain falls mainly on the plain' .. :)

[Lisasview]

Ha ha......

[Blunt--Instrument]

The poem and picture has a film noir feel to it.
I never see men from the the back view naked and it struck me how much I liked the image and then the sexy feel of your poem. Knowing there would sex to follow with you ..

[Lisasview]

Crazy that I did not see your insightful review until now...a month since you so kindly posted it.read moreCrazy that I did not see your insightful review until now...a month since you so kindly posted it.
Thank you so much... Lisa

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lisa.... sculptures of Men and Women are acceptable in Rome...
and your poem is accepted as Art. Perfect passion.... gently, Pat

[Lisasview]

Hi Pat,
I know it is a bi wild and over the top but I thought it was rather perfect for my Desire poem...Glad you understood what I was doing and felt my poem was like art.
Lisa, early here in Spain

[Patricia Wedel]

Yes … as we become more seasoned.. we realize the Beauty of Body Art and similar to Cloud formations.. we see so many Sculptures that Grace our Day. At night the Sky can be a Kaleidoscope of Romantic Rendezvous…. tenderly, Pat

[Lisasview]

Thank you again for your wonderful review...

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I see what you mean in the desire realm ....

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[Lisasview]

What did you like about my poem. Review are very important.
Lisa

[Chris Shaw]

Hot and sensual Lisa. You do this genre justice. And you certainly selected some fine eye candy to accompany your words. Hope all is well in Spain. Haven't seen any new postings from you for a while. I had to search through your archives. All the best.

Chris

[Lisasview]

Thank you much for your wonderful Chris...
I have been bogged down with so many Spanish issues here...
I am almost finished with two more poems...
Just never have anytime to work on them.
Thank you fir asking,
Lisa

[Alanforfun]

‘Cupids shaft aimed straight and true, gives Sensual Pleasures all night thru”

[Lisasview]

Not sure if you liked my poem or not?
I did enjoy your little rhyme.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Alanforfun]

I did indeed like your poem…

[Lisasview]

Thank you for your kind review!!
I do appreciate it.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Neville]

wow .. I was not expecting this at all .. a delightful venture into my most favourite of poetic genres Lisa .. One thing is for certain, you aint no robot are ya .. Neville

[Lisasview]

Hi Neville,
This is my third sensual in a series of three... It just need up that way..unintended to be a series of three...First time I ever tried writing anything sensual.. Reviewers are quite surprised.. For some strange reason I found it quite easy to write these..so I wrote another two..
Lisa

[C. M. Miller]

Well, what struck me first was that I'd like to have an a*s like the one posted in your poem. That having been said, ('cuz I just now said it) the poem flowed smoothly like a cool bubbling stream, waking up from a long winter." Anticipation Fulfilled" would also be an apt title for your poem, simply because it ended as such. Yup.

[Lisasview]

Good morning from a cool morning in Spain,
So glad you enjoyed the photo and my poem...
I think that I might consider using just Anticipation for another poem in the future, So thank you for that... This is number three in a series of three that I wrote this past month. I had never written a sensual poem before..Thank you so very much for your great review.
Lisa

[William Michael Reeves]

I think you forgot to label it for mature. But I can't imagine children are reading through our poetry. That said, I like your unique structure. As the words read the halt of your stanzas are like a hot breath being caught in the heat of the moment. Drawn in anticipation for the stimulation of your poetic vision. My loins might have stirred....yikes!

[Lisasview]

So glad you liked my poem.. Yes, I did forget to add Mature to this poem, but actually when speaking with Richard about my sensual poems he said that none of them should be labeled mature... Glad my poem stirred you... means my poem says what I want it to say.
Lisa, now in Spain

[William Michael Reeves]

If you're in Spain now, where were you before? Somewhere with a view? A view of your mind?

[Lisasview]

Lived in France and Italy as a young child, then in Hollywood, California, then on the beach in a house we built near Santa Barbara, then Texas for 10 years to be nearer our daughter and family..and then Costa Blanca, Spain...Been here 1 1/2 years.. This is perfect for me... A view to my mind is so true... I am a water colorist...we will be here for the rest of our lives..
Thank you for asking.. where do you live?

[William Michael Reeves]

I've lived in Seattle all my life. A beautiful city under siege by the human condition. Like most of the world. I'm an artist as well. Musician too. A lot of my poetry become songs. That's quite an adventure you've lived. Glad you have a life with a view now. Hope you find the same inspiration I have here in the cafe.

[Lisasview]

Thank you Bill for responding... Oh yes, my days are filled with inspiration..
Lisa about 7am

[Ken Simm.]

Sensual but without being tacky. This is good.

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much Ken... Did you happen to read the first two I wrote... These are the only ones that are sensual that I have ever written..
Lisa

[Ken Simm.]

Will get to those soon. Promise

[Lisasview]

Okay, that is great... Thank you!!

[Gee]

Lisa, Lisa, Lisa, you minx :)
More well.written sensual fayre.
Good morning :)

[Lisasview]

Well, you are up bright and early..
Not sure where the three sensual poems I wrote recently came from...Did you read Innocence... not sensual..but my newest and oh so different poem..
Thank you for reading and reviewing Gordon
Lisa