Desire

Desire

A Poem by Lisasview
"

Third one of my sensual poems... Free Verse

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    Desire....


I can't help looking ...

naked he stands,

his body, a young man's;

yet ...

older.


Behind the door  ...

hiding,

watching him shave ...

knowing

soon his legs

will cover mine.


Air heavy

in moaning desire,

he appears ...

bodies press together; 

yearnings release

we both desire.


Quivering anticipation;

our love continues....

through the night.


          ~~~


© 2023 Lisasview


Author's Note

Lisasview
If you happen to pass by and read my poem I would appreciate a review.
I always review whatever I read.
Thank you,
Lisa

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Lisa! You certainly are turning out to be the sensual one, aren't you. haha Your choice of words and the anticipation you share and have shared in your other poems is a fine style to undertake. I'm sure the girls on the site will see this and blush. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Suppose to pour.... again...here
Lisa
Neville

2 Years Ago


ah' well dont they say 'the rain in Spain falls mainly on the plain' .. :)
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Ha ha......




Reviews

The poem and picture has a film noir feel to it.
I never see men from the the back view naked and it struck me how much I liked the image and then the sexy feel of your poem. Knowing there would sex to follow with you ..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Crazy that I did not see your insightful review until now...a month since you so kindly posted it.read more
dear Lisa.... sculptures of Men and Women are acceptable in Rome...
and your poem is accepted as Art. Perfect passion.... gently, Pat

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Hi Pat,
I know it is a bi wild and over the top but I thought it was rather perfect for my De.. read more
Patricia Wedel

2 Years Ago

Yes … as we become more seasoned.. we realize the Beauty of Body Art and similar to Cloud formati.. read more
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Thank you again for your wonderful review...
I see what you mean in the desire realm ....

Like

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

What did you like about my poem. Review are very important.
Lisa
Hot and sensual Lisa. You do this genre justice. And you certainly selected some fine eye candy to accompany your words. Hope all is well in Spain. Haven't seen any new postings from you for a while. I had to search through your archives. All the best.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Thank you much for your wonderful Chris...
I have been bogged down with so many Spanish issue.. read more
‘Cupids shaft aimed straight and true, gives Sensual Pleasures all night thru”

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Alanforfun

2 Years Ago

I did indeed like your poem…
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review!!
I do appreciate it.
Lisa, now in Spain


wow .. I was not expecting this at all .. a delightful venture into my most favourite of poetic genres Lisa .. One thing is for certain, you aint no robot are ya .. Neville

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Hi Neville,
This is my third sensual in a series of three... It just need up that way..uninte.. read more
Well, what struck me first was that I'd like to have an a*s like the one posted in your poem. That having been said, ('cuz I just now said it) the poem flowed smoothly like a cool bubbling stream, waking up from a long winter." Anticipation Fulfilled" would also be an apt title for your poem, simply because it ended as such. Yup.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Good morning from a cool morning in Spain,
So glad you enjoyed the photo and my poem...
.. read more
I think you forgot to label it for mature. But I can't imagine children are reading through our poetry. That said, I like your unique structure. As the words read the halt of your stanzas are like a hot breath being caught in the heat of the moment. Drawn in anticipation for the stimulation of your poetic vision. My loins might have stirred....yikes!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Lived in France and Italy as a young child, then in Hollywood, California, then on the beach in a ho.. read more
William Michael Reeves

2 Years Ago

I've lived in Seattle all my life. A beautiful city under siege by the human condition. Like most of.. read more
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Thank you Bill for responding... Oh yes, my days are filled with inspiration..
Lisa about 7am
Sensual but without being tacky. This is good.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Ken... Did you happen to read the first two I wrote... These are the only ones tha.. read more
Ken Simm.

2 Years Ago

Will get to those soon. Promise
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Okay, that is great... Thank you!!
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Lisa, Lisa, Lisa, you minx :)
More well.written sensual fayre.
Good morning :)


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Well, you are up bright and early..
Not sure where the three sensual poems I wrote recently c.. read more

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Added on March 6, 2022
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Lisasview
Lisasview

Benitachell, Alicante, Spain



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