Cry

Thanking Richard with his fabulous help. Rhyming Quatrains and Couplet in 10-count

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

The hurt here is palpable and leaves the reader wondering what the cause of the sustained anguish might be; the death of a spouse perhaps? We do ascertain that the relationship was sustained for " so many years" so naturally we deduce that the depth of feeling was mutual. But we are left with the sense that the object of pain and desire might be "back around" leading us to think of a broken relationship or a ghost perhaps. This was an intriguing write. Thank you for sharing.

[Lisasview]

Hi Fabian,
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review my little poem... To be honest I have no idea where this poem came from... I got up one morning and felt a pressure to write it... Perhaps it is about my past loves and losses?? All within me...Sadly, I relate to my poem although now and for the past 40 years I have been in a relationship with no goodbyes... But before then I had so many almost long term loves..
Thank you for saying that this was an intriguing write... really means a lot to me. And, inspires me!
Lisa, finally on the computer after a long, long day day

[Cherrie Palmer]

watercolor medium traced out in tears.
A very heartfelt piece.

[Lisasview]

Thank you for feeling my little poem Cherrie,
Lisa, afternoon in Spain

[Robert Haigh]

The emotions can be felt in every line of this poem. Anyone who has ever lost love - for whatever reason - should be able to relate to this poem, Lisa. Expressed poetically, and with feeling!

[Lisasview]

Hi Robert,
Thank you for reading another one of my poems... I really appreciate your kind review.
Lisa, getting to the end of a long day

[Kim S.]

This is such a deep, emotional read, it tugs at the heart.

[Lisasview]

Thank you for reading and reviewing... Always means a lot to me.
Lisa, now in Spain

[Ruth Martz]

That is an extremely beautiful poem. Lovely flow of words.
I don’t know how to give you a rating but you deserve 100%

[Lisasview]

Wow 100% is rather amazing... Hi Ruth, What a dear you are to have read and reviewed and loved my poem...
There is not rating scale...only a review saying what you felt about a poem you read... this is all that one can ask for.. good to bad...suggestions or not..Thank you so so much...
Lisa

[Ruth Martz]

My pleasure

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Ever so sadly beautiful ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

[Lisasview]

Hi Marvin,
I could have sworn that I thank you so much for your kind review...But now looking over my poems I see that I did not!! So thank you!!!
Lisa, now in Spain

[Ranger Kessel]

A very sad love poem but I also sense hope in your words. I liked this. Nicely write.

[Lisasview]

How on earth did I miss your very kind review.. I remember reading it and I thought I had said thank you! I think I forgot to press the Post comment button...sorry...
Lisa, getting late in Spain

[Richard Knox]

Hello Lisa,
I thought I had reviewed this, but apparently not.
Upon re-reading it, I am struck again by how beautifully written it is! The images flow gently and sadly from your words, phrasing and meter, which all reinforce the story of love lost. A wonderful, emotional poem!

[Lisasview]

Thank you so very much Richard for checking back to make sure you left a review... I too sometimes read a poem and realise awhile later that I neglected to leave a review... I suppose the old saying "Haste makes Waste" applies here.. I am always so ~ so busy...
I am delighted to read that you liked my poem... I have no idea where this one came from...but, when I got up one morning I just wrote it ll down... The feelings must have been deep within me...
Lisa, on my computer

[Stuart Munro]

Many a sadness in love ,from Shakespeare’s works , how much sadness ,

[Lisasview]

Hi Stuart,
For some reason I neglected to send you a thank you for your kind review... I had a very busy week.
I do appreciate that you took the time to read and review..
So appreciated,
Lisa

[Stuart Munro]

Thanks Lisa , I’m ok , lol
Enjoyable read of your very good poem

[Stuart Munro]

Lisa , I have read your Cry poem , you take a room
And it changes personality , from comfortable to agony , happy to tears

[Lisasview]

Thank you so much for checking...Yes, sad and agony...but some of mine are not quite as sad..
Lisa

[W. Barrett Munn]

"watching waves rush to past's deserted shores" is a brilliant metaphor. Congratulations.

[Lisasview]

Somehow, I missed you kind review and only just now saw it...To say my line was a brilliant metaphor is so kind of you... I love when metaphors really work to get my message across..
Thank you again,
Lisa, getting late in Spain