Kissing the Sun

Looking into your eyes

Everything just dissapears

The glow around you is like looking at an Angel

Floating in your arms, and kissing the sun.

 

My soft lips against yours

Nothing is better than feeling that

The glow around you is like looking at an Angel

Floating in your arms, and kissing the sun.

 

With you I feel complete

Only me and you in the world

The glow around you is like looking at an Angel

Floating in your arms, and kissing the sun.

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

Sweet...I really like the thought of kissing the sun. Sizzle.

[greenie447]

This is a beautiful poem! I love the picture it puts in my mind. :)
Wonderful job on this!

[clauds294]

This is a soothing poem, love the repition and the visual I get from reading this. Good job! :)

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

wow i like this poem it is very good.. Nice job..

~SK

[Color of the Iris]

That was a very beautiful poem, and I enjoyed it much...

"The glow around you is like looking at an Angel
Floating in your arms, and kissing the sun..." :D

Good Job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem of love. Kind and gentle words allow the reader to feel the thankfulness and joy of true love. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[lifesanexcursion]

I like how the first two lines of each verse are talking about the same thing, but using different words, and then the ends are the same. Gives it a certain flow.