-Waiting-

Here I am,

Waiting on you to come and hold me.

You loving me,

Is such a miracle.

I thought I would never find someone,

So great, just as you are.

I love you dearly,

Just like you love me.

Our love is so pure,

It's like a lovely diamond ring.

Every moment that we share together,

Is one in a million.

I have been waiting,

Waiting for you all my life.

Now I have found you,

Now I am loved.

All the hurtful words,

From that past.

Are now no longer linging,

Here in my memory.

All that matters is our love,

And how strong it keeps growing.

I'm still waiting,

But waiting for you,

Is something I will always do.

Reviews

[Elaine]

very sweet. it actually remindes me of two of my friends at the momment.

[Taylor H.]

this is sweet. I really liked it

[aftervision]

love is a great thing to have it and to realize it while we are together with it -- refreshing bit of words here my poet

[Allison]

Love it, its so great to read things like this and know wat other people r thinking.

[SamBug]

This was beautiful. I loved it. Thanks for sharing!!

[A.Lee]

This is excellent!!! I think this is by far your best poem as far as language, form, and rhythm. Great job! I'm giving you 100% on this one. Well written.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very beautiful and filed with kind and loving emotions. I like the feel and desire to be with the missed lover. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is beuatiful