I want you baby

I want you baby

A Poem by *Always be Me:)*

At night I ly in bed

Hopeing some time

during the night

that you would show up.

I ly in bed

Wanting you

Needing you

Missing you

And most important

Loveing you.

I know you love me too

And I know you wish I was in your arms.

Baby I wanna hold you,

I wanna be with you right now

Baby I want you!

© 2010 *Always be Me:)*


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I love this. It shows the effect of love and lust great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Those words whisper on the phone on lonely night are helpful. Made those dream dreams come alive. A beautiful poem. The emotion of love are strong in your words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is very great

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw young love :)

a few spelling errors along the way
(hoping, loving, lay or lie)

I'd encourage those edits so this poem
will stand as a perfect love note.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is a beuatiful sincere write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Know just how you feel!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice work. I love the feel of this. A few spelling errors ("ly" should be "lie" and "loveing" should be "loving") but other than that, great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is such a beautiful desire expressed through your words. That longing for your sweetheart. Wonderful words!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Poignant!
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


Good write. The message couldn't be clearer.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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*Always be Me:)*
*Always be Me:)*

Twin falls, ID



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Hello, my name is Michaela. I am 28 yrs old and single! I have brown hair and dark greenish blue eyes. I graduated last year....amazing feelings :). I'm 5'3" and I weigh about 140lbs. I love to hang o.. more..

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