This is an interesting poem. Your emotions come through well through it.
Your spelling needs to be revised. "Ly" should be "lie, "hopeing" and "loveing" do not need the e's.
For the sake of being concise, "Wanting you / Needing you / Missing you" can be changed to "I Want you / Need you / Miss you."
When you have a proper name or nickname, ie "Baby," you should use a comma to separate it from the rest of the sentence, since it is not necessary to the statement.
Other than that, this is a good start to a poem. Good job.
i can feel the love and compassion you put into this poem as if it were almost obsession...you convey the emotion of love very well and its nice being able to clearly see that...see if u can accomplish that with other feelings and emotions...another good poem...keep it up :)
This is sweet. I'm not really a fan of the romantic poems, though. A few spelling errors: 'ly' should be 'lie'; 'hopeing' should be 'hoping'; 'loveing' should be 'loving'.
Good job! :D
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