Lying With You

While I lay here

On this bed

I think of how wonderful

And perfect it is

To be lying next to you.

I love you dearly

My wonderful fiancé

The way you look at me

The way you love me

The way you care

It’s all so prefect

When I am Lying with You

Author's Note

I hope you like this, I love it! :D

Reviews

[deeps]

This is wonderful and sweet

[A.Lee]

Very sweet :) Nice work.

[Senseless whatever]

Another good write. One can never express this feeling enough.

[Ruth]

Nothing can take that feeling away!
Awesome!
xx

[Taylor H.]

You have so many poems abotu your love (its not bad) good job

[~ Otto Girl ~]

i love it. I wish every night my boyfriend could lay with me. I wish he could always be with me. Nice job and great poem.