Lying With You

While I lay here

On this bed

I think of how wonderful

And perfect it is

To be lying next to you.

I love you dearly

My wonderful fiancé

The way you look at me

The way you love me

The way you care

It’s all so prefect

When I am Lying with You

Author's Note

I hope you like this, I love it! :D

Reviews

[Paul Okeke]

what a soft heart you are.......this is really nice...

[J.Black]

LOVE THIS! I know the awesome feeling :)

[Mike Espinosa]

This is a cute poem. Your emotions come through well.

I don't have many suggestions for this one, but you need to get rid of the 1 period you used, for uniformity's sake.

The second to last line, "It’s all so prefect" can be shortened to "So perfect." Just a concision thing.

Overall, great poem. Good job.

[clauds294]

This is so sweet!! :D

[aftervision]

this is the place that we all hope to land in one day my poet

[Laura Yida <3]

this is adorable!

[Allison]

It's so sweet and simple, but at the same time, it's amazing. Good job!

[ashley]

This is sweet. Good job. :)

[Augustus]

I really like your simplicity, Michaela... This poem is very direct but at the same time, your ardent love for your fiance shines through. Keep writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes we need to stop the perfect moments and make them stand still. A beautiful poem. Your words are wise and sweet. Most people learn too late they had paradise and allow it to escape. A excellent poem
Coyote