Dancing

Dancing

A Poem by *Always be Me:)*

Walking down the middle

Bradley and I dance to the song

Grind on me

Everyone joins in and dances

Kissing my neck and holding me close

So very hot and kinky

Everyone scatters as the song

Walk it out starts pumpin

While Bradley walks it out

I start gettin low with my girls

So much dancing is so much fun

Slow song comes on

Oh no where is Bradley?

Standing right behind me

"Baby, care to dance?"

Smile on my face

He holds me close

While we dance to our song

Wait for me, by Theory of a Deadman

Dancing with my U.S. Marine

Dancing is one thing that will...

Never be forgotten

© 2010 *Always be Me:)*


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i once thought that one would have to touch to dance -- the military taught me different -- i understand your heart and words

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great poem!

Posted 14 Years Ago


another great poem

Posted 14 Years Ago


seriously beautiful

Posted 14 Years Ago


THIS IS BEAUTIFUL

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is lively, expressive and realistic, fun-sentimental, the way
the reader connects, it feels like a departure into a last dance before goodbyes, awsome flow and feeling and the flow is as consistant
as the style :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice piece, it comes across very well :-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cute poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice write. Happy upbeat expressions. Sharing a positive thought or memory.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is such a joy in dancing, a celebration, and making that connection and melting into the one you love. This so beautifully expresses that!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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*Always be Me:)*
*Always be Me:)*

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Hello, my name is Michaela. I am 28 yrs old and single! I have brown hair and dark greenish blue eyes. I graduated last year....amazing feelings :). I'm 5'3" and I weigh about 140lbs. I love to hang o.. more..

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