Only You Baby

Thinking about us,

Laying in our nice bed.

With my head on your arm,

Looking at your beautiful brown eyes.

Only you baby,

Only you I will ever truely love.

Thinking about when you come home,

With our baby on your chest,

Me on your arm,

Looking at your beautiful brown eyes,

Only you baby,

Only you I will ever truely love.

Everyday we share together,

Every kiss we have forever,

Baby you are mine,

I am yours,

Only you baby,

Only you I will ever truely love.

Reviews

[Soul Magic✯]

awww this is beautiful from the heart and soul. that's true love there :)

[Senseless whatever]

Good poem. Love the message and the repetition. My only suggestion would be to change the second 'thinking' to 'dreaming' or something like that, just to help the flow for readers. Overall a very good write.

[Mike Espinosa]

This is a cute poem. Your repetition both in specific phrases and in line clusters was very powerful to your rhetoric. I think you should break this off into 3 stanzas though, after each "Only you I will ever truely love." (Just a side-note, it should be "truly," not necessary, but something I noticed) Your descriptions are also very cool., they are very comforting. Very cool poem.

[Becca*Type2012]

Awww! What a beautiful poem about love. This reminds of my boyfriend and I

[aftervision]

this is really sweet i must say -- i am feeling the stare in the eyes my poet - nicely written as well

[A.Lee]

This is really sweet. Very heartfelt. Nice work :)

[Sarah]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

[deeps]

This is wonderful

[~ Otto Girl ~]

Really Really cute.