Missing You

Baby I miss you.

I can't live without you.

Tears go down my face,

When you're not holding me.

Baby I miss you.

Your my life,

You're what makes my heart beat.

Baby I miss you.

Please come hold me,

And make these tears stop falling.

Reviews

[Paul Okeke]

uummnnhh you are always full of words..but you poems are always short and sometimes just looks like an epigram...well you doing good all the same

[deeps]

This is such an emotional write here.
So wonderful and sweet.

[Mike Espinosa]

An emotional piece. I'd watch out for misusing your "your"s and "you're"s, but that's only for formality. Other than that, nicely done. Good poem.

[Ruth]

From the heart and wonderfully voiced xx

[An owl on the moon]

Such an honest voice, the distance felt so deeply. Sadly beautiful.

[Sarah]

very cute

[~ Otto Girl ~]

This is a very cute piece nice job.