The Proposal

When he looks at you with,

Wonderful dazzling eyes,

He gets down on his knee,

With a serious smile,

Says,

"Baby, will you marry me?"

Those 5 words bring tears,

But don’t worry they’re happy tears.

She looks at the ring,

Jumps at him,

And kisses him like crazy,

Saying yes, yes I will!

Aaww, the sweetest moment,

All girls love. J

 

 

Author's Note

Wrote it fast, but I love it so! :)

Reviews

[zappy]

great poem this is very wonderful

[Coyote Poetry]

These words should be your best in a life. Poem is beautiful. Love is best part and hardest part to maintain. We must go back to the things that made us fall in love and keep doing them to keep happiness alive. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Jeff Miller]

Nice! My favorite part is "He gets down on his knee,

With a serious smile,

Says,

"Baby, will you marry me?""

Those 5 words bring tears,

[Senseless whatever]

Nice write. Sweet.

[Ruth]

Great write! xx

[The Analog Kid]

Good way to express the feeling of "that" moment!

[aftervision]

seems so easy to do -- but as guys we have the biggest probelm doing the bended knee thing

[FatalRewind]

Wunderbar for being a short and quick poem.

[Sarah]

i love it sooo much

[~ Otto Girl ~]

ya i do to.