Kissing Judas

one kiss

and i know

this is

goodbye 

Reviews

[Emrick]

I like the thinking you made here. I am not sure if the theme is betrayal, but if it is betrayal "Kissing Jesus" would be more appropriate or what do you think. I am just saying.

[Brook]

Hm. Either way works. I was thinking of the story from Jesus's perspective (as the one being betrayed) rather than from Judas's (as the betrayer), but either would work I believe.

[Alvin L. Kathembe]

I like this piece. It reminds me of Hemingway's six-word story...very clever too. Betrayal in the kiss...good work!