The Indian girl

The Indian girl

A Poem by outspoken1234
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"when the blood in your veins returns to the sea, And the earth in your bones returns to the ground, Perhaps you will realize this land doesn't belong to you, you belong to the land

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I looked up from the ground and saw a Indian girl standing in front of me 
She had a wolf standing by her side in the woods
Motioning me to move forward 
My feet protested
She was surrounded by a deep white mist 
I cocked my head to look closer
The wolf howled and moved his head to the side
She held out her arm 
For an eagle to land 
She spoke quietly 
This is no ones land 
We share the land for it takes care of us
I sat there wondering 
She was right on this it isn't our land to claim
I reached out to ask her a question 
I blinked and she disappeared into the fog 
She left me to question what happened 
Was she real or was she fake?
I guess it has to be faith 
When I saw the Indian girl a little while ago 

© 2016 outspoken1234


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Your story-in-a-poem reminds me of a similar real-life vision a friend of mine had, involving a wolf. Since I've been a student of Native teachings most of my life, I really love the way you've used the symbols of the culture to speak your message. I also love that you didn't go into the negativity of how terrible we humans have treated & raped & plundered our planet's resources. That much is already well known. Here, you stick to the positive message & I like that. Since there are many people on this website from the country called India, I wonder if it might be a little more clear if you used the description Native or Native American? Just a thought.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outspoken1234

8 Years Ago

I meant it as a native American



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Your story-in-a-poem reminds me of a similar real-life vision a friend of mine had, involving a wolf. Since I've been a student of Native teachings most of my life, I really love the way you've used the symbols of the culture to speak your message. I also love that you didn't go into the negativity of how terrible we humans have treated & raped & plundered our planet's resources. That much is already well known. Here, you stick to the positive message & I like that. Since there are many people on this website from the country called India, I wonder if it might be a little more clear if you used the description Native or Native American? Just a thought.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outspoken1234

8 Years Ago

I meant it as a native American

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I am 19 currently and love to write poetry it helps me think and clear my head and understand my emotions. I want my poetry to help others who might understand or are going through some of the things .. more..

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