The girl who loved the boy

Its about love and how the girl notices things about the boy he doesn't even know about himself.

The girl who was dating a boy noticed one day

He was not the same

His smile was brighter, dimples popping out clearly

Eyes shinning bright like little crystal pools

He laughed and cried and sang and hugged

Changed by the girl

She peeked small glances every now and again

For her eyes must of been deceiving her 

Could he really be changed?

Is this some kind of illusion? 

Days passed and nothing changed 

Same old happy boy with the shy, kind girl

Her heart was overfilled with joy

This all happened because the girl loved the boy

Reviews

[Davidgeo]

I had a conversation about this with someone recently. It was about the opposite though, how when you fall out of love with someone they start to look like total a******s but you still want to bang them out of spite.

Sometimes my conversations aren't healthy.

Nice poem... all happy and such. Though to be honest, if it was any longer I would've have stopped reading. Happy is fugging boring.

[Jeff]

Very well done. You told your story well throughout this poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing story told in the poem. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to very nice ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[outspoken1234]

Thank you for the excellent review!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.