The moon girl

This is about two sister who are polar opposites but are always chasing each other to be with each other.

She was the moon

Shining bright 

Like a star 

Streaking across the night sky

In a burst of light

She burns away the night 

Leaving a memory

You'll never forget

Her sister the sun

Shining bright in the day

But when night comes 

She's hidden away

Spinning and chasing each other around the sky 

Constantly trying to reach each other

The sun girl will always chase the moon girl

Hoping to reunite soon 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A enjoyable read. I like the story in the poetry and the hopeful ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[DayDreamer]

The idea is really interesting! I see the real world connection, the sun and moon will never be together at the same time, but do you think in your poem they will align with each other one day?

[outspoken1234]

In a way maybe I left it open to thought and wonder on will they or wouldn't they

[DayDreamer]

Mmm, I love the idea of it. Great poem man!

[outspoken1234]

Haha thanks brother