Streams of blood

I wrote this when my cousin died.

Red streams coat his skin

His blood so cold and red

He lays on the ground broken and lifeless 

No heat

No pulse

No life

Everything's gone

Everything's still

With one slit throat 

Red streams of blood

One single knife ended a life

Not able to create another slice

Face down on the ground

Not making a sound

Lifeless like a corpse should be 

No one will ever know why the streams flow

Help is no where to be found when your in-trouble 

The past needs to stay in the past 

Cutting his wrist to see the blood flow 

Those red streams will always coat his skin

Reviews

[ATCcool]

awesome.....nice method of writing!! and nice method of telling things

a single knife ended a life
not cutting another silce....kinda line there is amazing

[outspoken1234]

thanks that is amazing