More then a friend

More then a friend

A Poem by outspoken1234
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I wrote this for my best friend and me.

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Through every heart break
You've stood by my side
Through every disastrous mess
You gave me time to rest
Life's hard times are turned to sun shine
Fire and sin are turned into bliss
Your my sister
My best friend 
Your everything 
Your the reason I'm still alive
One things going to always be true
We'll always be more then friends
Through every dark night
You told me what's right
Like a friend always would
When I needed to cry you were always by my side
As a sister would 
Your going to be my best friend till the end
When I'm lost in the fire your going to be so much brighter
When I'm in the hard times 
Your my sunshine lighting my night into day
When there's no where to go 
At least I'll always know
You'll always be more then a friend
I know your going to be my friend till the end
But to me 
You'll always be more then a friend 

© 2016 outspoken1234


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In many places, "your" should be the contraction "you're" (you are):
lines 7, 9, 10, 18, 19, 21, & 25 . . .

Other than that, this is a heartfelt message that any best friend would love to have written in his/her honor. You've conveyed many ideas of what a good friend is to you. I sincerely hope the idea of "forever" is something that you'll both be able to embrace.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outspoken1234

8 Years Ago

I'll be sure to fix those my computer tends to auto correct many words that I type. Me and my friend.. read more



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In many places, "your" should be the contraction "you're" (you are):
lines 7, 9, 10, 18, 19, 21, & 25 . . .

Other than that, this is a heartfelt message that any best friend would love to have written in his/her honor. You've conveyed many ideas of what a good friend is to you. I sincerely hope the idea of "forever" is something that you'll both be able to embrace.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

outspoken1234

8 Years Ago

I'll be sure to fix those my computer tends to auto correct many words that I type. Me and my friend.. read more

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I am 19 currently and love to write poetry it helps me think and clear my head and understand my emotions. I want my poetry to help others who might understand or are going through some of the things .. more..

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