A place where I love you

This poem is about how it feels to lose a little sister and to cope with the feeling of grief and sorrow. While also dealing with the feeling of being happy she isn't suffering.

Fields of blue

Fields of red 

Hiding where I've never been 

Cross the sea's and mountains high

Is a field where I love you 

Where my sweet baby sister is 

Where I will be 

In the apple tree's

Beneath the sky's blue hue

Where my love lasts forever 

Summer will always bloom

Rest your sweet little head

My love will be with you alive or dead

For my sweet baby sister 

I want to hold you and never say goodbye

But your already gone from my sight 

My heart may be breaking 

Yours may be staying

So rest your head sweet little one

For your in a place where love bloom's

A place where I'll always love you 

Author's Note

I know this may seem a bit weird as far a poem goes but just so people know who read this I wrote this right after my sister passed away and every word comes from the heart and my soul.

Reviews

[SpiceCookie]

Beautiful. This poem is full of emotion and imagery. I felt a strong connection of love and sadness when I read this, since I also have a little sister, though she is still alive. This is not weird at all and actually very touching to me. I am sorry for your loss, and I hope that writing has helped you! Keep writing! :)

[Warrior]

This is ethos which is an appeal to emotions, you're able to get to the emotions of the reader by channeling your own emotions.

[outspoken1234]

Thanks for your comment

[Caddy]

This is a beautiful tribute to your sister. I am very sorry for your loss. There's nothing weird about it and your imagery was a lovely thing to see created in my mind. If holds your love and your sadness.
Thank you, for sharing this.

[outspoken1234]

It was difficult to write but I am glad someone else understands what emotions play out.