Short-n-Sweet

These tears fall on deaf ears

Unfelt and unfeared

Still alone

Still...after all these years

I know why of course

Of course I do

If you let no one in

No one shall care

When, how or even if you die

Reviews

[Michael X]

this poem speaks on levels of emotion-causing the reader to depthfully ponder the meaning
of life and how reality can create feelings in the heart which shell personality
in mnay ways I'm sure many people can relate to the vision- i really enjoyed the
artistic aspect it a black and white painted with color red, a bleeding heart
clear cut imagery, passionate- and subtle in effectiveness-very nice job!

[alesuriko]

Short, depressing, blunt. Good emotional display with a nice tone and rhythm.

[Enigma]

Powerful....
Fantastic poem!!!