Sea in a Seashells

Nature sends help for my soul

The breeze caress my skin

I felt it deep within

Even though it is thin

Enough to make you clean

The birds in air chirping

Sounds good in my hearing

How high they are flying

Above the clouds is amazing

My dog who's beside me

Truly the best to see

He jumps like an awardee

As I come with glee

It is a wonderful day

To give yourself pleasure today

Many things that can't pay

The happiness you will delay

Reviews

[Starr]

This is one wonderful write here, enjoyed this piece

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. The good description made me wish to be near the sea.
"The birds in air chirping
Sounds good in my hearing
How high they are flying
Above the clouds is amazing"
I liked the above lines, a lot.
Coyote

[Tinabells]

It's a honor to have you reviewed my poems. Thanks a lot Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my honor to read your work and you are welcome.

[LitStar]

here you give nature the personification of a person

one with open arms


perhaps a physician or medic , ready to operate


each verse washes over the eyes like the ocean you illustrate

cleansing perception as it creates one anew


-L.S

[Tinabells]

I appreciate your review here Luke. Thank you!

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful and sweet and I love
the rhyme hidden in this wonderful
Piece.

Nicely penned

[Tinabells]

thank you benita :)

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're very welcome 👍

[poetgurl]

Such a wonderful truthful write here. very nicely written

[Tinabells]

Thank you Kimmie! I appreciate it!