A Pain Endured

for my former love... one sided love

So much hurt...

I can't endure it anymore

times I spent with you

are no longer new

I pursued you

But didn't pursue me back

I endure it

I endured everything

you did

Do you treasure me?

cause it hurts so much

It's killing me

It's freaking' killing' me

I love you...

did you love me too?

Reviews

[Starr]

Such a straight forward write and kind of relatable.

[Einstein Noodle]

simple ...straight forward ... relatable :( i want a bit more "showing" in this instead of "telling" ..one sided love is a traumatic, deep hurt that can chain one's heart for a long time ... maybe a bit of imagery here and there ... a bit of metaphor perhaps ... i think the brutal honesty and vulnerability are the strong points in this poem :)
E.

[Tinabells]

Thank you Einstein :)

[Trouble]

There's so much truth in this, ugh, I could feel the pain through the screen. Very good.

[Tinabells]

Thank you Allie!

[poetgurl]

such a sad write, very emotional read. nicely expressed though

[Tinabells]

Thank you so much for reading mine :)

[Gee]

I guess not if you are writing this........Unrequited love, the most painful kind