the locomotion

the locomotion

A Poem by oursong2

the locomotion of commotion 

to find the love we need the potion

hold my heart

its locked in motion

from the start into the ocean

send me back


i will hold your hand

until we have found

this love we share carried thru sound

it will carry us on


lets find the feeling my heart its reeling

in the clouds its past the ceiling

lets settle in


so pass your heart 

mine is feeling heavy 

we will share the weight 

the beat is steady

carry my soul

© 2010 oursong2


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very nice

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is very intriguing... I particularly like "Hold my heart/ it's locked in motion" it has a strange tug on my own heart strings.. Excellent write =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


i love the ending! beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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oursong2
oursong2

wildwood, MO



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