sinner

sinner

A Poem by oursong2

sinner oh sinners

oh where will we go

some say we wont see

where the clouds meet the snow


this journey it will take us

around this barren land

but in the end

we will stand hand in hand


so settle your heart

and lay by mine

we will wrestle this madness 

until we shine


the beginnings about to fade

but the ends about to start 

the perfections in this world 

are sifted thru the heart


no matter what we have done

no matter what we have seen

the devil in us all

will finally be released 

© 2010 oursong2


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Your third stanza is my favorite. "So settle your heart/and lay by mine/we will wrestle this madness/until we shine" very very powerful lines there... I love this poem... then again I am a very dark writer myself..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Your sinner sounds sweet. Is there a thin line between saints and sinners?

Posted 13 Years Ago


:) I like this." But in the end, we'll stand hand in hand" Very nice poem, It's very inspiring to me

Posted 13 Years Ago



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oursong2
oursong2

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