The Sweetest Love

when you look into my eyes 

you will see the ocean 

when I look into yours 

I will find the potion 

that makes me smile 

makes me get lost for awhile 

makes me sing 

looking forward to our life 

with you everything is alright 

I could cry into the sky 

but my tears would fade 

you would look at me gently 

and simply say 

that we are hear for a reason my love

 we're tangled in each other and we'll go above

 when its time 

but right now we have a life to rhyme 

let us take it to the streets 

with my hand in yours 

and our flying feet will take us away 

past all the sadness to the brightest days 

Reviews

[Im His Daughter]

very nice! good job

[Kate Hunter]

Adorable.

[Anna]

Soo cute and nicely put together. Great Job I loved It!

[SamBug]

I loved the imagery and feeling this sent out. It was great!

[Sarah Jane]

Very romantic, happy. To me it seems as if this poem is about love conqers all. It's good to hope and your poem describes it very nicely.