Shivers

There is something that use to be

Over the ocean and thru the trees 

Something we might not see

We all feel

It spins us around

It makes us heal

All these bruises and these scars

Makes us feel very far

From the way things were

Now the way things are

It is simply overbearing 

All these secrets were not sharing

Hidden deep in our hearts

Now there tearing us apart

So just let them out 

They will pour into the rivers

Just the thought gives me shivers

All these words are just fillers

For the love that we challenge 

For the love that we share

These secrets that we have

Will never compare 

Reviews

[Meraki]

Aside from a few grammatical errors, it's nice. I actually shivered. Whether it was from the weather or this poem I don't know but good job.

[Lola_Bee]

beautiful and flowing, a really good read