Pretender

Pretender

A Poem by otterbe
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Glacier with a soul hides behind a mask of frozen smiles.

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Glacier with a soul

hides behind a mask

of frozen smiles.

 

The Great Pretender

 

Taking what he won’t give,

feeding on feelings he

can’t return.

Playing games with rules

only he understands.

 

Secure

in his ice domain

 

always alone.

© 2014 otterbe


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This poem makes me sad, which must mean that you're great at portraying your image!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh I have met a few of these pretenders... Amazing piece where I felt the chill of the cold heart that rests behind the frozen smiles.

Posted 9 Years Ago


otterbe

9 Years Ago

thank you Kalypso, I appreciate the feedback. Yes, there are a few men and women out there like tha.. read more

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otterbe
otterbe

Las Vegas, NV



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I'm a retired R.N. interested in writing. I've been writing on and off since I was a child. I used to write stories for my brothers and sisters, I was the eldest of seven and had to keep them amused.. more..

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