Haven

Haven

A Poem by Jonny Otter
"

Second Entry!!! A poem in the style of Wilfred Owen. A soldiers contemplation of his struggle.

"
I feel the numbness seeping through,
Those who survived one of the few,
Yet is it so for I lie in pain?
Was our struggle for glory on in vain

This make shift ward, a make shift haven,
Can do no good but offer sedation,
The nurse tends, like a mother, to my wounds
Before my salvation I feared I was doomed

I look down towards my severed limb,
Injury inflicted, the out-look grim,
The pain inside, a ball of fire
I hear my scream reach higher and higher

For war itself is a dangerous weapon,
It sends boys to hell or high heaven,
I weep to myself, tears of my life,
That I threw away in the constant strife

© 2012 Jonny Otter


Author's Note

Jonny Otter
What do you think?

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

179 Views
Added on September 12, 2012
Last Updated on September 12, 2012
Tags: War, World Wars, hospital, haven, pain, Owen, nurse

Author

Jonny Otter
Jonny Otter

Norwich, Norfolk, United Kingdom



About
Language & Literature inspire me. I love using ideas in both literature & music. A goal to improve both my work and help others. I find Etymology and the structure of language interesting. more..

Writing
Facing Facing

A Story by Jonny Otter