HavenA Poem by Jonny OtterSecond Entry!!! A poem in the style of Wilfred Owen. A soldiers contemplation of his struggle.
I feel the numbness seeping through,
Those who survived one of the few, Yet is it so for I lie in pain? Was our struggle for glory on in vain This make shift ward, a make shift haven, Can do no good but offer sedation, The nurse tends, like a mother, to my wounds Before my salvation I feared I was doomed I look down towards my severed limb, Injury inflicted, the out-look grim, The pain inside, a ball of fire I hear my scream reach higher and higher For war itself is a dangerous weapon, It sends boys to hell or high heaven, I weep to myself, tears of my life, That I threw away in the constant strife © 2012 Jonny OtterAuthor's Note
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StatsAuthorJonny OtterNorwich, Norfolk, United KingdomAboutLanguage & Literature inspire me. I love using ideas in both literature & music. A goal to improve both my work and help others. I find Etymology and the structure of language interesting. more..Writing
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