Time

I'm sorry if this seems really repetitive

Two days ago

you loved me

Two days ago

you cared

Two days ago

we spent together

Two days ago

we shared

Yesterday

you hated me

Yesterday

you lied

Yesterday

we screamed at each other

Yesterday

you died

Today

they said you were bipolar

Today's

the day I cried

Today

they tell me: "suicidal"

Today

I want to die

Tonight's the night

I hang the rope

Tonight's the night

I smile

Tonight's the night

I meet you face to face

Tonight

I'm "suicidal"

Tomorrow

we will love

Tomorrow

we will care

Tomorrow

we will spend together

Tomorrow

we will share

Forever

is to love

Forever 

is to care

Forever

we will share together

For forever...

tonight, I'll dare

Author's Note

I'm sorry if it doesn't flow very well in places

Reviews

[Ember Smyth]

The flow of the poem is really good. I like how you use the time labels to further the story of the poem.