Just A Little

Give them just a little hope
A little love
To help them cope
With the storms up ahead

Give them just a little love
A little care
To help them shove
Those storms away

Give them just a little care
A little wish
To help them bare
Through the wind and rain

Give them just a little wish
A little life
To help them live
Till the very end

Author's Note

I was singing in the shower
(yes I am one of those people)
and then this just popped in my head. When it did it was a song and I was just singing it to myself as I did used to be just a song writer
(that's why you may of noticed that most of my poems have rhythm and rhyme in it)

Thoughts?

Reviews

[Cookie]

I really love how the first two lines of each stanza relate. That is a great idea that I've never thought of doing that way. I love it.

[InsanityWriter]

Nice. (: I really like the imagery of the storm. ^_^ Great work, thanks for sharing!

[Blue Shadow]

Cool...when I made one of my poems it came to me in a dream/nightmare thing...it always had rhyming couplets in the middle and one line in the beggining to rhyme with the last line in the end...but really nice poem.

[Just Kim]

very nicely done and said!

[Rhianne Ney]

This is like a song but well written I want to send this to a friend so she can be lightened up (:

[Carnation]

Go ahead

[Rhianne Ney]

(:

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks

[Carnation]

No problem, love to help any day

[Rhianne Ney]

(: Smiles again (:

[Carnation]

(⌒▽⌒)

[Rhianne Ney]

Nice emoticon you've there, anyways, hi again, fellow singer in the bath ~!

[Carnation]

Hahaha, thanks （＾◇＾）

[Rhianne Ney]

Yeah, *bump fists with you*

[Carnation]

*ROFL*

[Rhianne Ney]

Hhaa ^-^

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow! This is an honest, smooth reads. Minimal words but echoed a positive plea. Thanks for sharing!

[Carnation]

Glad you liked it （＾ν＾）

[blueholmes]

i remember one of my childhood songs :)) this poem employs giving even just a little to those who needed it.. and i strongly agree that everyone needs a little, whatever it is :)) great!!

[Carnation]

THANKS! （＾∇＾）

[blueholmes]

your always welcome :)

[Death Girl]

LOVE IT!

[Carnation]

Thanks