INSANITY

JUST A GOOD POEM

                                       INSANITY


KNOW WHAT YOU FEEL
CAUGHT IN A DEADLY RAIL IN THE ECSTASY OF MADNESS IN FULL

A DEADLY TRAPPED IN THE COMING AND GOING
A LONG LIE

A DEADLY TRAPPED, MOURN THEIR ETERNAL
FIELDS ON ICE

A DEADLY TRAPPED IN ORDERS AND VOICES
ITS DARK NIGHTS

KNOW WHAT YOU FEEL
CAUGHT IN A DEADLY RAIL IN THE ECSTASY OF MADNESS IN FULL

FEEL AND LIVE IN YOUR IN
SWIMMING AREAS OF CREAM
CRY YOUR LONG DARK NIGHT
AND IT DIES IN YOUR DREAMS.

Author's Note

friends read the poem and tell me if you liked

Reviews

[stars are far]

This is amazing.. the last stanza mostly..well done

[Aparna Krishnan]

Wow! Awesome! Especially the last paragraph!

[Frieda P]

Seems all poets have a poem about insanity, hmm wonder why? We're a bit nutty it seems. Like that last stanza, did you mean to include that extra 'in' at the end of the first line?

[oscardelamarca]

so friend, the first of the last line is to give even more strongly, that to read really feel inside the insane, you know that every poet in his bohemian has something that goes beyond the mundane, well who does not have something madness in his mind, thanks for reading

[oscardelamarca]

really thanks Linda, I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Linda alexander]

CRY YOUR LONG DARK NIGHT
AND IT DIES IN YOUR DREAMS.
Great write , enjoyed