At Times

Good poem just read the emotions

At times I feel lonely,
I just cant help my self,
don't know what am doing,
I feel like am in hell,

At times I feel so scared,
Of the shadows in the dark,
I fear they will come & take me,
To take me where they are,

Many times I feel am losing control,
Holding on to a my helpless soul,
Crying out for help but no one will hear,
Because I am no longer here

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

You could have done better. The intensity of the poem is deep, especially the second stanza, but it could do with a couple revisions here and there. Such as changing all the words saying "am," to "I'm."
Anyhoo, good job. Just strive for better next time.

[Btwixer]

Deep write, I really enjoyed this.