LONDON CALLING ... AT THE TOP OF THE DIAL

LONDON CALLING ... AT THE TOP OF THE DIAL

A Poem by R J Askew
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The Clash took their title from the BBC's wartime broadcasts to occupied Europe ... the pic, which I took just before going in for a drink wiv me mates, is of one of my fave London pubs ... cheers!

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Your eyes
your Eyesssss
I HOTLY request
To be in your eyes
To be, to be, to be in your eyes
Swish, swish
Swirl, swish
In the swim, in the swim of this shimfinsome fish
My soul request is that you read hear

http://rjaskew.com/

 

© 2011 R J Askew


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Short and sweet, but to the point. I really like it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Short and to the point. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Extraordinary and very imaginative writing. Your skill and talent shine in this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


an awesome website my friend :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a very interesting poetic ramble, through thoughts, we all interprete differently. I enjoyed this fully!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love your word "shimfinsome" a good word!
I am glad to see you here :)
I looked . love the photos and yes Louise is a beauty.
I plan to go back later ...
Have a good weekend!

Chloe


Posted 12 Years Ago


The famed words of repition and power, linger in your piece, well done, good read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hello Ron, I visited your website, beautiful house fassades... first, congrat on your book :) It sounds interesting, and you used also some poetry :)

this poem? a great way to say you want her attention! sweet like always. Best wishes, lara

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh everything looks to be in new color when painted by loves brush

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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