AT THE END OF THIS LINE YOU'LL FIND

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Lips, mouth, tongue, throat, a man made blood

For you to touch, for you to feel

For you, for you, for you to know

To kiss this inspiration wild

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Reach! reach, through metaphysics new

Reach, hold, keep, this rib-cage dream

Deeply, deeping, deeper downing

Drowing in this pulse of being

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Lipsome, licking, lapping, lusting

Life force panting surgent triumph

Lips, lipping, touching fingers kiss

A man, a life, a love, alive

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At the end of this flood you'll find

Hot bliss of love deep in your mind

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Reviews

[rosemary keogh]

your writing is amazing. thank you for sharing.

[Raven Starhawk]

This displays extravagant skills.

[RainQueen]

The magic of passion finding answering passion. The image of the man bearing his throat for it, inviting it. Raw images elegantly displayed, down to the red red letters. Striking and not soon forgotten. Outstanding.

[Nick Erickson]

"Lips, mouth, tongue,..." I started reading, thinking love - lust - desire.

"To kiss this inspiration wild" my mind shot to how it feels when sitting to write a new story and watch as a character develops.

Reading this reminds me why I love to write, why I love to love, why I love life - passion - plain and simple.

[Amy Craig Beasley]

~ so red ---

so real like the rib CAGE ~ but no cages with you as you swiftly dart here and there ~ lots of depth to reach into and swallow ~

biblical allusions too ~ i think

[J. J. Nightingale]

WARM THOUGHTS ON THIS COLD AND SNOWY DAY ...

I LIKE .. JASMINE X