AT THE END OF THIS LINE YOU'LL FIND

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Lips, mouth, tongue, throat, a man made blood

For you to touch, for you to feel

For you, for you, for you to know

To kiss this inspiration wild

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Reach! reach, through metaphysics new

Reach, hold, keep, this rib-cage dream

Deeply, deeping, deeper downing

Drowing in this pulse of being

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Lipsome, licking, lapping, lusting

Life force panting surgent triumph

Lips, lipping, touching fingers kiss

A man, a life, a love, alive

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At the end of this flood you'll find

Hot bliss of love deep in your mind

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Reviews

[AmberLillies]

I see someone hasn't lost his touch.
Loved this piece. Passionate, sensual, and fiery.
"A man, a life, a love, alive"
I think that might be my favorite line; "a man" makes it sound more real, giving a description of the narrator, and therefore an identification.
Amazing piece, as always.

[Yellow Butterfly]

A tantalizing read that excites the senses of one's desires brilliantly in this write. The repetition of your words flow from your red pen like blood running through the veins. Sending the heart into a frenzy as it races faster and faster as each stanza pops out at you.


Your pen is definatly on fire!
Ouch!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Your creativity and talent spills through this beautiful piece! Excellent writing!

At the end of this flood you'll find
Hot bliss of love deep in your mind

This was so hot and fantastic that leads one's mind reeling for more!
Last stanza ties this poem up nicely!

[Keve]

You have presented a wonderful example of alliteration used effectively here. Very lusty and sweet.

[joshua deathdealer]

I like the red font and how it ties with this. Excellent work. "Reach, hold, keep, this rib-cage dream"..xx

[Kim's Poems]

This is such a romantic beuatiful write, very enjoyable to read

[Muse]

The bloody red font makes me want to reach through the rib cage....so that I may devour each and every word. I smirked at the review below that said it was erotic and disturbing...ha ha ha. There's just not enough morbid writing to go around my friend. I loved it! xo

[Ruth]

Oh, this is beautiful! Almost a redemption feel to this piece for some reason, wonderfully told and elegantly so! xoxo

[Ariana]

nice writing

[Tina Kline]

Erotic and romantic. There is lots of motion in this, some of it very dramatic and disturbing to me. Over all, I really like this poem.