OF COBWEBS LAVENDER AND LIGHT

OF COBWEBS LAVENDER AND LIGHT

A Poem by R J Askew
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to hear me read this one pls click on >>>>> http://snd.sc/HIX95w

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Your silver thread of truth am I

 

Keep hold of me, your joy to see

 

I'll guide you well right through your life

 

For I am love made real for you

 

To know my strength new makes your myth

 

I will not break and nor will you

 

In Nature's primacy we're spun

 

Of cobwebs, lavender and light

 

Fantasticalities made real

 

We find ourselves in lines divine

 

In memories of birth and death

 

Keep hold of me, your truth to see

 

You are to me, Persephone

 

And I to you, true poetry

 

 

(TO HEAR THE VERSE PLS CLICK ON http://snd.sc/HIX95w )

 

 

© 2012 R J Askew


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I don't doubt it. Knew of a fella in '32, but he resurrected on the third day and hasn't been heard from since.

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Well-expressed. Nice flow. Good metaphor! It actually grows more beautiful when re-read.

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Enjoyed reading this eve..Sunflower

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how many times I can read this, over and over it tumbles, growing louder and stronger until it sweeps me in and I acknowledge my truth. Truth is contagious, and you, my dear writer, are a genius! Well put!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


how many times I can read this, over and over it tumbles, growing louder and stronger until it sweeps me in and I acknowledge my truth. Truth is contagious, and you, my dear writer, are a genius! Well put!

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Posted 13 Years Ago


good to read this here ~ love truth's poetry ~

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Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautiful write dear Ron! Never a truer word spoken other than in poetry!

Smiling at you

Tai

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Posted 13 Years Ago


How beautiful this is .. it has a soft loving hum to each line yet positively glows! ' I'll guide you well all through your life ~ For I am love made real for you .. '

You rarely post these days, so it's great to see your name and poems now and again .. this is no exception.

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Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh Lando what a beauty! Fantasticalities, thats like the sun coming out and cobwebs, lavender and light. This was like eating the most preciously decorated cupcake! Yum!

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Posted 13 Years Ago



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