WRONG WAY FOUND

Dark breath...

sthguoht kradeb gnihctaW

seramthgin ruoy woleB

uoy erofeb gnitiaW

suoicsnoc ruoy dniheB

sthguoht xiwteb gniklaW

 

 

MEOP TSOHG

GHOST POEM

 

 

Walking betwix thoughts

Behind your conscious

Waiting before you

Below your nightmares

Watching bedark thoughts

 

 

Reviews

[mick weller]

ha ha - neat - audience participation on another level m8
I'm here with a mirror... but now I'm thinking `well if I print it out... and hold it to the light...
ha ha, neat - a triumph of graphics? - it would be great if the keyboard allowed the possibility of a mirror image
how could I think it would work - demon writer you! ha ha...
It's `good` that the graphic element of the piece overshadows the message I feel... hmm

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Lol Cool! Like always, pure creativity! It's got a pretty cool flow to it. ^^ Thanks for sharing this! Ghosts are cool, but creepy at the same time. XD

Ironically Yours. Blade and Blood

[Hedra Helix]

ohhhh that's dope. i love how betwix and bedark threw me off as I tried to read it backwards. awesomeness points for not making it easy. Sly fox in cuttle clothing.

[Robert Luna]

Most enjoyable and creative read. I really like this. The mirror image reflecting was a great effect. You are always a pleasure to read my friend.


Great Job!!!!!!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Luckily, I could read this backwards and then alas I found it repeated...neat play of words. Quite compelling. You are always branching in new directions which is great. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

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Now there's a twist that finally exists!
So clever and I can easily imagine this
as the thoughts a ghost could introject
into a mind of a victim.
Cool!
Jack

[Gary H]

Funny you should do this as I had planned to do a similar thing to round off mine and Nats story. Have to go back to the drawing board now. Maybe I'll have to come up with some kind of code.....
Interesting to see though as this looks as effective as I anticipated it would. Great idea and nicely done.

[Jessica Benfield]

wow... im going to have nightmares tonight lol =]
nice poem!
smiles,
jess

[Christel Grady]

This is such fun with words & language! Your prowness is astounding!

Cheers,
Christel