THIS MOMENT OF LIFE

May these words bring good cheer now and for ever more. Preening paragon of positivism, at your service *bows*.

Holds us, for ever one to one

Captured by words, lovingly penned

But then is over and is gone

 

Captured by thoughts that time can bend

Enraptured by joys without end

Holds us for ever, one to one

 

Captured by feelings, woes do mend

Enraptured by hopes time can bend

But then is over and is gone

 

Captured by hope foes can't end

Enraptured by feelings that mend

Holds us for ever one to one

 

Captured by joy that knows no end

Enraptured by thoughts that time can bend

But then is over and is gone

 

Captured by love we know will mind

Enraptured by words, loving penned

This! moment of life

Holds us for ever, one to one

But then is over, and is gone

 

 

Reviews

[SM Davis]

Captured by thoughts that time can bend
Enraptured by joys without end
Hold us for ever, one to one

Ah yes...living in the moment definately hsa it's benefits doesn't it? However, once this moment is gone it is gone forever ... we must continue to live in the moments that are brought to us...for they are truly all we ever have.

This was beautiful indeed, and poigniant.

[Emily B]

Lovely and uplifting. Just what I needed just now. Cheers!

[Drea]

Truly
Simply
Lovely

[Maleficent]

Beautifully lyrical...

[Robert Luna]

Such a deep thought provoking piece here my friend. You ideas and thoughts flow through this and into my thoughts and ideas. Allowing myself a chance at focusing on the message of your powerful words. I really loved this and it is quite inspirational.


Great Job!!!!!

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

I agree with Captain Blackheart, you really have out done yourself with this. The language is beautiful and the images it displays to me are even more so. Living in the moment can mean so many things, no woes of the past or threats of the future, just now, what is, no anticipation, just the thrills of a wild ride. Wonderful work, as always.

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

Holy Sh*t. This is great. I loved this piece...I would count it amongst the best I have ever read by you. You really out did yourself with this. I wonderful write!

[Ken Simm.]

One minute in the life of the world is going by, paint it as it is, said Cezanne.

[Amanda]

it is true that once the moment of life is gone, it is gone forever...we have to cherish it at the moment, live it to the fullest and the make the most of it.

what beautiful descriptions...very nicely written.

Amanda

[Rain]

THIS is the best thing I've seen from you. It has these repetitive lines that fit so well, and mean so much. It could easily be put to music. The lyrics are kind of haunting...just my style. I love it. Rain..