AN OASIS WOMAN'S LOVE

Five verses of six, seven-syllable lines, embracing a manage a trois. Fiction. to amuse a friend who is enjoying life right now.

1.
 
Thundrin' to my o-a-sis,
Wo-man, wo-man, o-a-sis.
 
Long of leg and blond of hair,
Happy in her tranquil lair.
 
Poet man swims up and down,
He's the king without a crown.
 
  2.
 
Thundrin' down my autobahn,
Busy, busy, busy man.
 
Long of leg and deep of calm,
Settled in her lovin' charm.
 
Poet man in rhyming mud,
Licks her lips and does her good.
 
3.
 
Thudrin' down my valley Rhine,
Drawn to her Frankfurt-on-Mine. 
 
Long of leg and lovin' balm,
Peaceful in her stroking palm.
 
Poet man dreams up a verse,
Slips it in her soul's deep purse.
 
  4.
 
Thundrin' through my desert life,
Chained to head of loveless wife.
 
Long of leg and tango arm,
Soulful in her lovin' psalm.
 
Poet man is always there,
With the flair to comb her hair.
 
 5.
 
Thundrin' to my o-a-sis,
Wo-man, wo-man, o-a-sis.
 
Long of leg and blond of hair,
Happy in her tranquil lair.
 
Poet man swims up and down,
He's the king who now must drown.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

CURIOUS GARDENING MAN EXPLORES
 
 
Slips behind the smile
A poem lands upon his nose
He blinks in disbelief
A second flits behind his eyes
Oasis Woman's calmness fills the air
He inhales her poetry
Lungs big
Hungry lungs
Sucking her in
All, in, filling
Full filling her gardening man
Haertbeat, poem, heartbeat, poem
'Gaze into my tree' she wills
Wills him to see his way into her
To see her love curled up
She smiles as he sees it
Stretches to stroke
Strokes her love
Until she moans
Moans, moans
As he falls lips to love
Moaning love moans, moans, moans the more

Reviews

[Gary H]

Liam Gallagher meets Kraftwork. Bizarre beginning? Ha ha ha! Was only mentioning this poetry style to Deni last night so I guess you were listening in.......which is a lot safer than listening to Nats and I! and you mention the Tango man. What ever happened to him?
I think Lara would have really appreciated this. Is a shame she can't be here to witness the words.
'tis nicely done sir.

[Patsy]

that was very nice with a touch of humour - images come to mind when I read you... Thanks...

[Nico]

amusing and lovely piece......thank-you for sharing!!!!

[SM Davis]

again got me giggling. very well done my dear. very well done!

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Good rhythm!!! HA!!! The mind never stops! Reminded me of Ahab riding to the tent on his camel named Clyde?? I think the o-a-sis put me on Ahab's trail...I found this difficult to review because it is not easy getting into your head sometimes, but I did laugh a few times so it must be humorous! What a crappy review his is Ron, sorry, I should have given it a miss...
Cheers,
Helen :-)))

[desertraven]

amuzing piece.
Sandra

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Great job. Keep it up, camper!

-Gabe

[LilyGrace]

I like this, especially the link between the last two lines of 1 and last two of 5. Good write, great rhymes.
LGD

[Jennifer Ryan]

Very, very nice. I love the way you write. I especially like this:

Poet man dreams up a verse,
Slips it in her soul's deep purse.

yeah we know what he's slippin her!

Great job Orlando.

[Carlee]

I like this, it's unexpected and I like the rhythm of it. It is also unique, and I like the style of it. Yay for you

[Phibby Venable]

what excellent images..what a poet man!!
very fine work.