THE RAPIER

15 syllables in the blade, 14 in the hilt ... making the balance point the letter N where the two join.

 

 

A

B

L

A

D

E

M

A

D

E

T

O

F

I

G

H

T

I

N

T

H

E

W

A

R

S

O

F

P

O

E

T

I

C

S

U

C

C

E

S

S

I

O

N

ART

TRUTH head HEART soul TRUTH

HARD

FAST

SHARP

STEEL

MADE

REAL

SWORD

ART

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

wow, wow, and more wow. I just love your mind! I don't know of another who could come up with such an artful piece. It's stunning. I love it. It conjures up Quentin Tarrantinos "Kill Bill" pictures...and the man who made the swords. It is an art, for sure, just as any smithing and poetry is!! Excellent piece.

[Destiny]

Very nice. Thank you for writing.
♥Destiny♥

[IMOGEAN]

Creative.

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

The sword shape of this is really cool. Good job on this form of poetry. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[LilyGrace]

Blimey. I'm impressed. This is, for lack of a better word, cool. Clever, artistic, generally great!
LGD

[James Horsley]

Incredible! This is probably the most original piece I've read in a long time. Good to see someone still appreciates this kind of thing.

[BrightEyes]

wow - I love the uniqueness of this work! I agree that swordmaking was definitely an art - just like any other. You've literally made a picture of your words; without losing the meaning or unity of those words - excellent job.

laura

[Floating on the feather..]

Whoa.. this is fabulous.
Sharp and precise. I like the unique style as well.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This is great, you should enter it in the concrete forms contest if it isn't over yet. I entered one of mine there, Ailurophile. Go over and check out the contest if you haven't entered this there already.

[All faded blue]

Don't think I have ever seen anything quite this unique! Nice work.

[PoemRodent]

First the praise... Greatly penned and well done my friend.

Now the Dostani Humor....

Can you do this with a d***o?

Dostani