Joy Touching Words

Joy Touching Words

A Poem by R J Askew

The tips of your words are tight packed with nerves
Touching transmissions of musical light
You surge in hot pulses of language divine
To express your soul made meaningful fine
You pour from the deeps of your ink well of joys
To soar in the keeps of creation that buoys
You feel in my feeling your music is felt
That talents to you by life have been dealt
Touching creations of gentle insight
The tips of your words make love-versing curves

© 2015 R J Askew


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"The tips of your words make love-versing curves"
I like this


Posted 8 Years Ago


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KBW
I find this piece very intriguing and craftily written. Good read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This poem so powerfully express the depth of words.....

loved the phrase "love-versing curves".....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Praise and adoration for a lovely singer? I find this intelligent, keenly worded, and with great alliterations and rhymes.

Posted 8 Years Ago


waves of metaphors, an homage to an exceptional poet, I'd like to read him or her, too :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Deep joy, as professor Unwin was fond of saying.

Such words do not trip lightly off the tongue, nor should the tongue trip lightly on love-versing curves.

Posted 8 Years Ago


To express your soul made meaningful fine

There is a comfort in reading someone else's words...like a beating heart on a page. As if safety is found in the reveling of someone else's vulnerabilties found in their words. Love this one, Ron...as I do all.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Razor sharp wording. 'The tips of your words are tight packed with nerves.' Language as music.

Love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


It has been a while since I read your words. Your title caught my attention and your poem delivered. You always had such a lovely unique way with words. 'You pour from the deeps of your ink well of joys To soar in the keeps of creation that bouys' I don't think I have ever read a move beautiful joyous line..You last line gave me goosebumps. It is exquisite, exciting and beyond the magical..an extraordinary beautiful inspiring write..

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is so magical...a race through the veins and subtle downpour of deliciousness :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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R J Askew
R J Askew

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