Joy Touching Words

The tips of your words are tight packed with nerves

Touching transmissions of musical light

You surge in hot pulses of language divine

To express your soul made meaningful fine

You pour from the deeps of your ink well of joys

To soar in the keeps of creation that buoys

You feel in my feeling your music is felt

That talents to you by life have been dealt

Touching creations of gentle insight

The tips of your words make love-versing curves

Reviews

[Lisasview]

Hi there,
Really enjoyed this poem of yours.
Very interesting use of words…
I was drawn in by your first line.
The tips of your words are tight….I needed to ponder that one sentence before going to the rest to enjoy the smooth ride through your poem
I always love reading poems that make me think and wonder.
Lisa, sunny afternoon in Spain

[light and ashes]

an enjoyable write. thank you for the read.

[zainul]

A perfect tribute to a perfect poet.Love the wonderful expressions that enlightened my heart.
Thank you talented poet for the great gift to your readers.

[Cherrie]

I don't know how I missed this when you first posted it.

In a playful way you dialog with your muse. Whose own creations inspire.

[Relic]

A poem rich in colorful adjectives, metaphors, and creative thought. A pleasing read for me this Tuesday.

Nicely done, R J.

100/100

[Chris Shaw]

What beautiful words. This is a lovely poem, a talented write.

Chris

[tracey]

hi Rj, im quite new just reading some of your work i loved this write, filled with romance a good read,,

[Neville]

Perfectly put, I would say..............................Regards & All Good Things, Neville

[Andrew Nelson Stewart]

"Touching creations of gentle insight
The tips of your words make love-versing curves."

Very Insightful and like Allen Ginsberg said once " Follow your inner moonlight: Don't hide the madness." Felt the intensity of saying words are powerful when spoken with truest passions behind these verses. Continue writing sincerely your friend in writing and life.

[lightsong]

Exactly what I might feel, go through and aim to when I write, sometimes I feel like I'm gonna burst my soul into words but don't know how... it's like an urgent need, that burning desire, to create something brilliant... something others can feel in their hearts, that what's important, that they can feel it.

Sensitive write, thank You for sharing.