ART WATCHING ART

ART WATCHING ART

My gift to you .. I take your arm

Into god's gallery .. we steel

Nine Caravaggios do swoon!

To see such creativities

I watch you watch how they smirk back

For you are Nature's living art

For your creation sparks alive

Stir art to breathing sighing craves

To be! your creativiti's

Forked inspiration striking home, home, home, home

You make tame art hung round us wild!

My name's one Caravaggio

O! O! O! O! what art is this?

Raised up in your dark talent's .. kiss

Reviews

[ANTO]

"Nine Caravaggios do swoon!" - what imagination - i love this thought of such a thing

"You make tame art hung round us wild!
My name's one Caravaggio
O! O! O! O! what art is this?
Raised up in your dark talent's .. kiss" - dramatic to the hilt and humourous too - great stuff Orlando

[R J Askew]

Cheers Anto

[Tina Kline]

A very creative and romantic tale.
I enjoyed this lively and inspiring poem!

[R J Askew]

Thank you.

[Tina Kline]

You're very welcome. :)

[Rocans]

Nice poem, is that picture Caravaggio's "Medusa"? Very nice. I like your language, and the structure recalls Shakespearean sonnets.

[Neville]

Missed this till now, how did that happen? Now safely locked away in the vault of my favourwrites...

All Good Things my literary Friend, N

[Shaquana Adams]

You definitely portrayed a some stunning imagery with this poem. I love it! Thank you for sharing this :)

[Shirlena]

Absolute stunning use of words and vocabulary. I could read this over and over...and I will.

[J. Alfred Prufrock]

*smile* ok, i like this one too.

[Ruth]

Blimey!
This made me dizzy...in a good way...
Superb x

[R J Askew]

Cheers .. PS I've enjoy reading you! You got me thinking.

[Ruth]

Same here hon, always enjy reading you x

[Ren Black]

Very beautiful imagery you have portrayed in this poem and very creative, well written.